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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #5 &#8211; Self Made Man by Tom</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jan 2012 11:50:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Casey, hope you enjoy them!</description>
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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #5 &#8211; Self Made Man by Casey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Casey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jan 2012 11:41:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Tom. 

Great track - I look forward to exploring your other four 52 Things posts.  :wink: 

Best wishes, 

Casey</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Tom. </p>
<p>Great track &#8211; I look forward to exploring your other four 52 Things posts.  <img src='http://www.songwright.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=':wink:' class='wp-smiley' />  </p>
<p>Best wishes, </p>
<p>Casey</p>
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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #4 &#8211; Mother&#8217;s Been Talking To Ghosts Again by Tony</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tony</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jan 2012 07:46:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>:idea: 

Please go and have a look at my site tonycornwell.com .

These are older tracks of mine -- forget the vocals, a guy we roped in, intonation yes, emotional understanding no -- and I think we are ploughing adjacent paddocks.

My latest bunch of songs are about a couple of mentally ill people getting their injections, a kid who goes bersek at school, life&#039;s great questions -- VI How do you know where you&#039;re going to if you don&#039;t know where you&#039;ve been? How can you know what you&#039;re looking for if you don&#039;t know what you&#039;ve seen. Chorus: All you can do is to take a long view and trust what has previously proved to be true and hope you know yourself better than you do. VII How can you know what a heartaches for until you&#039;ve heard a sigh?
How can you feel that you know what&#039;s true If you&#039;ve never heard a lie? -- , etc

Presently I&#039;m attempting to put music to:  &quot;We are global citizenry, planet Earth is our nationality, Acting together we are history, so brothers and sisters sing along with me: Workers of the world unite, we have nothing to lose but our chains, what is more we have a world to win, where everybody gains.&quot;

And it struck me that the drum sound and your vocals are rather lovely.. OK then I&#039;ll get back to it.

But I do want some fresh sounding vocals like yours.

Tony C</description>
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<p>Please go and have a look at my site tonycornwell.com .</p>
<p>These are older tracks of mine &#8212; forget the vocals, a guy we roped in, intonation yes, emotional understanding no &#8212; and I think we are ploughing adjacent paddocks.</p>
<p>My latest bunch of songs are about a couple of mentally ill people getting their injections, a kid who goes bersek at school, life&#8217;s great questions &#8212; VI How do you know where you&#8217;re going to if you don&#8217;t know where you&#8217;ve been? How can you know what you&#8217;re looking for if you don&#8217;t know what you&#8217;ve seen. Chorus: All you can do is to take a long view and trust what has previously proved to be true and hope you know yourself better than you do. VII How can you know what a heartaches for until you&#8217;ve heard a sigh?<br />
How can you feel that you know what&#8217;s true If you&#8217;ve never heard a lie? &#8212; , etc</p>
<p>Presently I&#8217;m attempting to put music to:  &#8220;We are global citizenry, planet Earth is our nationality, Acting together we are history, so brothers and sisters sing along with me: Workers of the world unite, we have nothing to lose but our chains, what is more we have a world to win, where everybody gains.&#8221;</p>
<p>And it struck me that the drum sound and your vocals are rather lovely.. OK then I&#8217;ll get back to it.</p>
<p>But I do want some fresh sounding vocals like yours.</p>
<p>Tony C</p>
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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #4 &#8211; Mother&#8217;s Been Talking To Ghosts Again by Tony</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tony</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jan 2012 07:20:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ok got me there. 

Have you seen Penn and Teller&#039;s &quot;Bullshit&quot; series? Good on this. But if we are going down the route of cynical con artist and &#039;hysterical sisters&#039; how about &quot;Our Lady of Fatima&quot;?

Also, as a convinced materialist, I would have to point out that at the same time as the Fox Sisters were &#039;rapping and a cracking&#039; a wide spread Revivalist fever was spread across the USA. 

Both these phenomena had their roots deep in the break up of old USA agricultural economy  and it&#039;s post Civil War industrial domination.

The ruling class in the USA had learned much from the UK masters of imperialist hoodwinkery and deception and distraction of the masses and welcomed any means by which their attention could be taken off matters political and instead be focused on matters spiritual.

Not a lot different from the ways of the ruling classes operate in our period. 

Only problem is they never had so many serious artists determined to uncover the truth of society and then &quot;.. go tell it from the mountain..&quot;

And this site contains not a few of this &#039;uncovering and telling&#039; sort.

Must admit though, I didn&#039;t pick up the Fox Sisters. John Edwards yup! 

Regards

Tony C</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ok got me there. </p>
<p>Have you seen Penn and Teller&#8217;s &#8220;Bullshit&#8221; series? Good on this. But if we are going down the route of cynical con artist and &#8216;hysterical sisters&#8217; how about &#8220;Our Lady of Fatima&#8221;?</p>
<p>Also, as a convinced materialist, I would have to point out that at the same time as the Fox Sisters were &#8216;rapping and a cracking&#8217; a wide spread Revivalist fever was spread across the USA. </p>
<p>Both these phenomena had their roots deep in the break up of old USA agricultural economy  and it&#8217;s post Civil War industrial domination.</p>
<p>The ruling class in the USA had learned much from the UK masters of imperialist hoodwinkery and deception and distraction of the masses and welcomed any means by which their attention could be taken off matters political and instead be focused on matters spiritual.</p>
<p>Not a lot different from the ways of the ruling classes operate in our period. </p>
<p>Only problem is they never had so many serious artists determined to uncover the truth of society and then &#8220;.. go tell it from the mountain..&#8221;</p>
<p>And this site contains not a few of this &#8216;uncovering and telling&#8217; sort.</p>
<p>Must admit though, I didn&#8217;t pick up the Fox Sisters. John Edwards yup! </p>
<p>Regards</p>
<p>Tony C</p>
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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #4 &#8211; Mother&#8217;s Been Talking To Ghosts Again by Tom</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jan 2012 17:44:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, but we are not talking about real hallucinations of ghostly encounters, we are talking of cynical con artists! The song was partly inspired by the hoaxes of the Fox Sisters: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fox_sisters</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, but we are not talking about real hallucinations of ghostly encounters, we are talking of cynical con artists! The song was partly inspired by the hoaxes of the Fox Sisters: <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fox_sisters" rel="nofollow">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fox_sisters</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #4 &#8211; Mother&#8217;s Been Talking To Ghosts Again by Tony</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tony</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jan 2012 08:35:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>No offence but it might be better the other way around: &quot;The ghosts have been talking to Mother again.&quot; Straight away we&#039;re in Psycho territory. I&#039;ve worked a lot in mental hospitals, nursing homes you name it.

Rarely does the individual create a correspondence or communication with the &#039;other side&#039; it&#039;s much more common that the &#039;voices in the head&#039; become more and more annoying until the persecuted one yells out: &quot;GO away from me !!!!&quot; or similiar.

Surely, mother can respond to the ghosts but and here&#039;s another point, she won&#039;t be having a discussion; it&#039;ll be more like a ongoing, low grade, hostile and barely understood conversation. 

She&#039;ll be listening to ghosts and arguing with them. I know this is way off the point but nobody ever has hallucinations which are pleasant. You&#039;ll never get &#039;voices&#039; saying: &quot;Gee whiz Tom that colour really suits you, brings out the colour of your eyes... are you losing weight? Sure do look sharp today Mr Slater!&quot; 

All internal voices are by their nature -- as fractured off parts of the ego integration process -- lost and lonely bits and shards of a personality.

Anyway I&#039;m taking your stuff to the the first meeting of our society and will keep you informed.

Tony C

that</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No offence but it might be better the other way around: &#8220;The ghosts have been talking to Mother again.&#8221; Straight away we&#8217;re in Psycho territory. I&#8217;ve worked a lot in mental hospitals, nursing homes you name it.</p>
<p>Rarely does the individual create a correspondence or communication with the &#8216;other side&#8217; it&#8217;s much more common that the &#8216;voices in the head&#8217; become more and more annoying until the persecuted one yells out: &#8220;GO away from me !!!!&#8221; or similiar.</p>
<p>Surely, mother can respond to the ghosts but and here&#8217;s another point, she won&#8217;t be having a discussion; it&#8217;ll be more like a ongoing, low grade, hostile and barely understood conversation. </p>
<p>She&#8217;ll be listening to ghosts and arguing with them. I know this is way off the point but nobody ever has hallucinations which are pleasant. You&#8217;ll never get &#8216;voices&#8217; saying: &#8220;Gee whiz Tom that colour really suits you, brings out the colour of your eyes&#8230; are you losing weight? Sure do look sharp today Mr Slater!&#8221; </p>
<p>All internal voices are by their nature &#8212; as fractured off parts of the ego integration process &#8212; lost and lonely bits and shards of a personality.</p>
<p>Anyway I&#8217;m taking your stuff to the the first meeting of our society and will keep you informed.</p>
<p>Tony C</p>
<p>that</p>
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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #3 &#8211; Last Sunlight by jamestoffee</title>
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		<dc:creator>jamestoffee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Jan 2012 02:07:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&gt;So the one thing I couldn’t choose in this song were the chords!
Ah, yes.  It looks like someone intentionally tossed a monkey wrench in the works.  Nevertheless, good prosody of angst in the words and chord progression.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&gt;So the one thing I couldn’t choose in this song were the chords!<br />
Ah, yes.  It looks like someone intentionally tossed a monkey wrench in the works.  Nevertheless, good prosody of angst in the words and chord progression.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Monday Morning Title Challenge #1 by jamestoffee</title>
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		<dc:creator>jamestoffee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Jan 2012 02:01:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like &quot;Crimson Undone&quot;</description>
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		<title>Comment on Monday Morning Title Challenge #1 by Tom</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jan 2012 21:49:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Bloom Dead and Death by Flowers are my favourite there, James. 

My own contribution:

Never say Die
Skull Beneath
On Roses
Vertigo
Crimson Undone
Red Paper Flowers
Under the Sun
Further Shores</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bloom Dead and Death by Flowers are my favourite there, James. </p>
<p>My own contribution:</p>
<p>Never say Die<br />
Skull Beneath<br />
On Roses<br />
Vertigo<br />
Crimson Undone<br />
Red Paper Flowers<br />
Under the Sun<br />
Further Shores</p>
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		<title>Comment on 52 Things #3 &#8211; Last Sunlight by Tom</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jan 2012 21:47:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, I see what you mean. There may be something in that, but alas my hands were tied - this song was the result of a twitter based &#039;chords challenge - we asked twitter followers to suggest a chord, then took the first four suggestions and wrote songs around them. So the one thing I couldn&#039;t choose in this song were the chords!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, I see what you mean. There may be something in that, but alas my hands were tied &#8211; this song was the result of a twitter based &#8216;chords challenge &#8211; we asked twitter followers to suggest a chord, then took the first four suggestions and wrote songs around them. So the one thing I couldn&#8217;t choose in this song were the chords!</p>
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