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Quick Tip – Don’t be a Slave To Songwriting Convention

Posted on June 1, 2009 by Tom
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Marking students coursework at my school, I came to a song that I gave almost full marks to.

One reason for the high marks was the song’s fantastic, subtle playing with songwriting conventions.

- The Bridge – The bridge happens after the second chorus, right? Not according to my student. Instead she put it between the 2nd verse and 2nd chorus. Right at the point I was expecting to hear the chorus again, I instead heard a contrasting minor key and a new bridge I hadn’t heard before. This the effect of creating a pleasing, balanced feel despite it being a short song. It was also suprising in musical way, which is always a good thing.

- 4s – Everything in popular song comes in fours, right? Four bar phrases, creating four line melodies, four lin verses, four line choruses. Not according to my student. Instead, she had a really effective verse that had a three line melody.

Neither of these ideas is new, and neither is a radical departure from ‘standard’ structure. However, they do show a young songwriter who is confident enough to play with conventions without abandoning them.

PS One thing we don’t mark on the GCSE is the quality of lyrics. This student could possibly use some help on her lyrics, and with my own songwriting I’m feeling the same, so here are some links on lyric writing:

Rhyme Patterns

Lyrics writing is an Art that needs to be Practiced.

Creating a List of Possible Song Titles

Categories: Form in songwriting, Lyrics, Songwriting Structure

Eurovision 2009 – Alexander Rybak – Fairytale

Posted on May 17, 2009 by Tom
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NB.I’ve since written a follow up to this post which can be found here

I watched Eurovision 2009 on Saturday. I even drank Bucks Fizz and managed to get through the interminably long scoring section without getting bored and turning over.

I’ve watched Eurovision for the last three or four years, and the standard is getting better. Now the rules have been changed to mollify the geographical bias of some countries, it’s nearer to being a song competition than it has for a while.

Were there any world beaters this year? No, even the best songs were merely okay. For this post, let’s take a look at the winner ‘Fairytale’ by Alexander Rybak to see if there are any songwriting ideas worth taking.

I know, I know. He’s obviously cut from the same charmingly-ugly mould as Zac Efron – he’s got the sort of face that little girls love and everyone else wants to hit. That was an unfortunate factor in his favour, as this probably wasn’t the best song of the night. However, it is a catchy little number.

  • Chords: The song is in Dm and uses just the one chord progression: Dm Gm Bb A. This is a very strong, familiar chord progression. The basic journey from I to VI to V in a minor key (eg. Dm Bb A) has been used in countless songs and has a vaguely ‘folk’ feel to it.
  • Bass Line: Again, very strong and familiar – constant motion from root to fifth and back again on every chord.
  • Violin refrain: Another folky element, the violin refrain with it’s constant pedal note on the A string. This we hear at the beginning of the song and after every chorus, including a small solo section after the second. It usesjust three notes apart from that open string: E F and G.
  • The Chorus Melody: Placed right at the top of Rybak’s voice, to make it sound passionate. This melody uses only E F and G and is simple and memorable enough to be catchy.
  • The Lyrics: These scan well enough for English written by a non-english speaker. Personally I’m much happier when the lyrics are in native languages, but that’s just me. The verses almost tell a story. Well… in the first verse he’s in love with his fairytale, in the second they argue a bit… and that’s it.
  • The Arrangement: There are some nice little moments, such as the pause before the second chorus. But like almost every song in this competition, Fairytale just fizzle’s out after the second chorus. There’s no attempt at a bridge or any real contrast and after the solo violin refrain it just leaps into another chorus.

If you’re looking for songwriting ideas to steal, the chord progression and bass line are up for grabs, as is the use of a recurring refrain. Placing the chorus melody at the top of your singer’s range can also be very effective if you want the song to sound passionate and heartfelt.

The ultimate effect of the song, given it’s week arrangengement after the second chorus, is to leave you feeling frustrated. Yes it’s a nice little chorus, yes the song mixes pop and generic folky elements well, but where’s the beef? Where’s the emotional journey. It might be pop, but that doesn’t mean you can short change the listener by not going anywhere.

To be fair, only a couple of songs in the competition did have anything to say after the second chorus, one of them Iceland’s contribution, the other the Uk’s, both of which I might write about in the next two posts.

Categories: Basics, Chords and harmony, Form in songwriting, Melody

A February in Songwriting

Posted on March 9, 2009 by Tom
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So how was your February? Mine was not nearly as productive as I thought it was goiong to be. I signed up to Febraury Album Writing Month, got all geared up to write, and then what did I achieve?

Five songs, one of which wasn’t really new at all. In fact it wasn’t even a song.

Seven Curses

Download Seven Curses

Started life as an audio sketch this one. Beyond the initial chorus I had absolutely no inspiration, so I had to rely on songwriting ‘tricks’ instead. These included the key change in the verse, the rather banal horro-film lyrics, and throwing in a widdley-widdely guitar solo rather than thinking of a decent bridge.

Fill my head up

Download Fill My Head Up

This was an improvised recording – I threw together a couple of chord progressions, improvised a vocal part and recorded that. Half way through that recording I decided to change key – up a tone again, like I did with Seven Curses when I couldn’t think what else to do.

After that I recorded three takes of backing vocals, and a couple of guitar solos. Given that it only took twenty minutes, I’m quite pleased with this. In particular I like the B Major chord on thechorus line ‘Fill my head up’.

Light a Path

Download Light a Path

I came up with the refrain for this while noodling about between guitar lessons a few weeks ago. Lyrically it’s supposed to be from the point of view of a person of faith. Not of any faith in particular, just general faith in all sorts of crackpot ideas.

I think the melody works for a couple of reasons. One, I’ve used a mixture of voices, including a synth sound. I’ve recently become very partial to a good synth sound.

The other reason is the change in mode – halfway through the melody it changes from major to minor. Gary Ewer has recently written an article about this, and in this case I think it works well.

Two

Download Two

This is the second of three pieces I wrote for flute and guitar during my degree. Not having a flautist to hand, I decided to realise it with guitar and synth. I’m particularly pleased with some of the chords in this: I was trying to come with chords with semitone/compound semitones in them eg. an E and F at the same time or a G and G# at the same time:

- 1 -
- 0 -
- 2 -
- 2 -
- 0 -
- x -

or

- 4 -
- 0 -
- 0 -
- 2 -
- 2 -
- 0 -

Mechanism

Download Mechanism

This was an attempt to write a set of steampunk lyrics – I’m quite happy with them, and also with the dirty synth sound and the chord changes in the verse.

In Summary

I’m hoping to do better next year, and also over this summer’s 50/90 challenge, which I’ll probably have a go at. All told, in the last year I’ve written 15 songs over two FAWMs and 25 songs for 50/90, as well as recording 8 singles for We’ll Write (a total of about 24 tracks so far). That’s a pretty good output, seeing as there aren’t very many throw-away joke songs amongst that (I haven’t got the guts to post the comedy songs that other people do!)

But next time, I’ll actually hit that magic number 14!

Categories: Chords and harmony, FAWM, Form in songwriting, improvising, Songwriting Structure

4 ways to write a bassline

Posted on September 26, 2008 by Tom
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A bass line- the lowest pitched part in the music, can make or break a song.

What do you do if you’ve composed a song with chords and melody and you want to add a bass line?

Rhythm

The bass instrument and bass drum have a similar job. They mark out the basic groove of a song. For example a rock song needs to emphasise the strong beats 1 and 3 – solidly and without interruption for the entire song. So you would have both bass drum and bass guitar playing a note on those beats.

Harmony

The bass line also has a harmonic job. Often it will spell out just the root notes of the chord progression.

In fact if you put together the basic groove of the bass drum with the root notes of your chords, you’ve got the most simple bass line:

Here an example of a C Am F G chord progression with just cheesey synth chords and drum beat:

Just Chords

And here’s the example with the bass playing root notes on the same beats as the bass drum:

Basic Bass

Melody

Bass lines often use more than just the root notes: they provide an interesting counter melody.

How can you write a melodic bass line?

  • With chord notes, for example the classic arpeggio bass line used in rock ‘n’ roll:

Rock ‘n’ Roll Arpeggios

  • With passing notes – that is a note, placed on a weak beat, that is NOT part of a chord. Instead it fills a gap between two chord notes. Eg. in a move from a C chord to an Am chord you might have a B note:

Passing Notes

  • With leading notes – that is a note that naturally rises or falls towards a chord note. For example A could fall to a G, B could rise to a C

Leading Notes

Summary

There’s more to bass line, much more, check out some good bass players to see what else you can do. But these ideas should get you started.

Please leave comments if you found this helpful.

Categories: Basics, Form in songwriting, Melody, Other People, Stealing ideas

An A to Z of Songwriting – F is for Form

Posted on May 26, 2008 by Tom
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Form, or structure, is simply what happens when. Do you just have the first verse, then the second, then the third? Do you have an introduction, a chorus, a bridge, a guitar solo? What order do they happen in?

Getting it right is vital if you don’t want to bore your listener. A twenty minute epic with a well thought out form will hold more people’s attention than a three minute pop song that isn’t well structured. Form matters.

I’ve posted about form and structure before (click here for the posts), but I wanted to use this post to define the verse and chorus, the two most common songwriting sections. To do so, I’m going to quote others.


1. The Verse

Your verses are responsible for keeping listeners interested. They develop your idea; they are the basic tool to advance your concept, plot, or story. They get us ready to hear the chorus — they control the angle of entry and the way we see the chorus. Like the paragraphs of an essay, each one should focus on a separate idea… (click here for the article by Pat Pattison)

2. The Chorus

Today, I want to write about the all important chorus. The chorus is generally the focal point of the song.

It’s what the listener usually remembers long after the song has finished. It is where the hook, the title or the main story idea of the song usually resides… …It’s like the chorus is the destination and the rest of the song is the journey towards it… (click here for the rest of the article by Corey Stewart)

I’m going to say more about form in my next post, but there are some important ideas for two of the most basic building blocks in songwriting.

Form shapes your song, holds the listener’s interest, draws them in. Getting it right is essential to good songwriting.

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Categories: Form in songwriting

Form – the 32 bar song structure

Posted on April 23, 2008 by Tom
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Continuing our occasional series on form, let’s take a look at the 32-bar song structure, or AABA form.

You’ve heard it before. Somewhere over the Rainbow is a perfect example, and a large chunk of tin pan alley’s output follows the same structure.

It can sound a little old-fashioned, but I think that might have more to do with the old fashioned harmony at play than the structure itself. Besides which, structure is one of the most dangerous things to be adventurous with. Sticking to well known structures is always a good idea for the songwriter.

Thirty two bars?

Yes, four times eight. That is, a four bar melody (A) that is repeated with different words (A), a contrasting four bar melody (B, sometimes called the bridge) and then a repeat of the original (A).

AABA

Often introductions or codas are added, for example Somewhere over the Rainbow has a coda that repeats part of the melody.

Is that all there is to it? Two four bar melodies?

Not quite. Harmony, that is the choice of notes and chords, can have a huge effect on structure. In the key of C, to end on the note or chord of C brings us home. That sense of rest is what you often get at the end of the A section.

The contrasting B section however is often harmonically unstable, shifting to one or more new keys and finishing on a chord that doesn’t give us that sense of rest, but instead leaves us wanting more. (Listen for the line That’s where you’ll find me to hear this point in Somewhere over the Rainbow).

But Somewhere over the Rainbow sounds so old fashioned!

It was written a long time ago! It is a matter of personal taste, but I find the major key, with it’s dominant seventh chord, more than a little cliched. I’d much rather have modal harmony and more interesting things happening with the key changes.

However, you could choose very different chords and still write a song with an AABA structure. And the basic idea of getting the listener used to one idea, then giving them a contrast, then returning to the original idea, is a very common and very effective one.

In Summary

The 32 bar structure still has legs, and is a great way to inform your own writing. Making it conscious can also give a new kick to your enjoyment when listening to all those old songs, because a thousand effectiv variations on this structure have been written.

And just because you’ve heard it before, doesn’t mean you should avoid it. Structures give us a framework to hang our song on, and making use of something like the AABA form is always a valid option.

Categories: Form in songwriting

Gradual or Sudden?

Posted on February 9, 2008 by Tom
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My listening over the last few days has consisted mostly of In Rainbows by Radiohead and Paradise Lost by Symphony x, and it’s got me thinking about change in music.

Generally, music has to change over time in some way. These two bands, from different genres, have quite different methods of achieving that change.

I’ve posted about Radiohead before, and mentioned that to begin with I wasn’t blown away by In Rainbows. Generally the reviews it has recieved have been pretty positive, however, and after paying it a bit more attention my opinion of it has grown considerably.

One thing that stands out about later Radiohead songs is the structure. Almost every song is built around the idea of gradual change, and movement towards a climax. Yes there’s very often a verse chorus thing going on, and the songs aren’t a million miles away from the normal pop song form, but very often the main point seems to be to get to that final third of the song where everything is different.

They achieve this in several ways.

Arpeggi/weird fishes

[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7e5Iqr0RLN0]

This builds up through the layering of arpeggios (who’da thunk it with a title like that?) reaching a glorious climax of complicated repeating patterns, that then suddenly drop away for line ‘I get eaten by the worms/and weird fishes’.

Nude

Another slow climax that peaks with the line ‘You’ll go to hell for what your dirty mind is thinking’. The word ‘thinking’ a long, falsetto melisma followed by a pregnant pause, and then some wonderfully melodic ‘ooohs’.

Both these songs, and plenty of others, rely on the idea that the song should build and grow towards a climax. That climax is sometimes a single line, and sometimes a new, larger, different passage of music. This is often followed by a quiet coda that restates some of the opening.

Symphony X

[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nO-cpWpzxVA]

This is quite different from how the songs on Paradise Lost are structured. There’s a long tradition of using elements of classical music in heavy metal, particularly Baroque and Classical ideas. Symphony X do this more than most and have built a reputation as the ‘classical music’ prog metal band.

Whereas modern minimalist classical music, of the type that I’d guess has had some influence on Radiohead, is sometimes about gradual change from one soundscape to the other, a lot of pre-romantic classical music had more clearly defined sections. And that’s the case with Symphony X as well.

Rifftastic

The average Symphony X song is far from an ordinary verse-chorus affair. Heavy metal often extends the introduction and middle sections of the traditional pop song structure, and prog metal bands go even further, adding all sorts of different interludes and breaks.

On the whole what they don’t do is build up and layer loops in order to get towards a single climax point.

So?

So, there are two structural ideas you could think about using here. One, the idea of gradual change, building towards the ‘aah’ moment. The other is the idea of sticking to clearly defined riffs and sections. Music requires change, but will that change be sudden or gradual?

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Categories: Form in songwriting, Songwriting Structure, Stealing ideas

Two more Fawm Songs

Posted on February 4, 2008 by Tom
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I’ve written and demoed two more songs for Fawm which puts me up to four. Technically this means I’m ahead of schedule, but I’m sure things will happen in the rest of the month to balance this out.

Spinning the Compass 

[audio=http://www.wellwrite.co.uk/songwright/tomslatter_spinningthecompass.mp3]

 To The Empty Sky

[audio=http://www.wellwrite.co.uk/songwright/tomslatter_totheemptysky.mp3]

Ideas to steal:

  • Fourths and fifths. Both songs have harmonies that emphasise fourths or fifths. The guitar chords of To The Empty Sky are built using collections parallel fifths, the vox harmonies in Spinning the Compass are sometimes parallel fourths
  •  Build up to something. To the Empty Sky is a big build up to the final line. It sticks with the same two chords until that point.
  • Move from Major to Minor. To the Empty Sky also move from A minor to a Major frequently
  • Change time signature if you need to. Spinning the compass does so frequently.

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Categories: Chords and harmony, FAWM, Form in songwriting, Melody, Songwriting Structure, Stealing ideas, time signatures

Second FAWM song

Posted on February 3, 2008 by Tom
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‘Black water’

[audio=http://www.wellwrite.co.uk/songwright/tomslatter_blackwater.mp3]

First draft lyrics:

Treading water, wound in my side
Overboard in the dark of the night
grinning faces threw me to my doom
and now my arms and legs burn with the strain

Threw me right in, cursing my sins
here alone, I’ll admit that they’re right
All the traces, the things that I’ve done
I thought I’d get away with all that pain

Black water, Floating out on the tide
Salt water, filling me up inside

Once a while ago, thought I might stop
Though I’d sinned there was time to make right
And now pace has, become too much,
as I go under I begin to pray

Black water, Floating out on the tide
Salt water, filling me up inside

But a rescue comes at last
Rough hands pull me out
cold lips on mine
some god took pity on me
some ragged angel came to my side

And if I’ve my time back,
Might I make things right?

But who’s gonna take me in?
If I find a way out of here?

Ideas to steal:

  • Main riff is in 7/8
  • chorus melody is the same little phrase twice with very different chords underneath: Eb Maj 7 F#min7 Bmin Faug.
  • Structure is dictated by the story, so there’ s a big change in pace on the line ‘But a rescue comes at last’

Some more fawmers: Elaine DiMasi Mike Skliar Phil Norman Pigfarmer Jr

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Categories: Chords and harmony, FAWM, Form in songwriting, Lyrics, Melody, Other People, Songwriting Structure

First song on FAWM.org – I may have taken leave of my senses

Posted on February 2, 2008 by Tom
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Yes, I’ve decided to take the February Album Writing Month challenge. I may be mad. But, if all goes well, you’ll be hearing a new song from me every two days for the month of Febraury, plus a collaboration (don’t yet know who with) on the 29th.

My first song is up, and it makes use of vague ideas you might have heard before.

[audio=http://www.wellwrite.co.uk/songwright/tomslatter_ropesaroundthesun.mp3]

Ideas to steal if you want:

  • The four chord shapes in the verse all use the open B string
  • The bridge happens after the second verse and before the second (and last) chorus.

Other people who’re FAWMing: jddennis, Vikki Flawith

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Categories: Form in songwriting, Melody, Other People, Songwriting Structure
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