Second FAWM song
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'Black water'
[audio=http://www.wellwrite.co.uk/songwright/tomslatter_blackwater.mp3]
First draft lyrics:
Treading water, wound in my side
Overboard in the dark of the night
grinning faces threw me to my doom
and now my arms and legs burn with the strain
Threw me right in, cursing my sins
here alone, I'll admit that they're right
All the traces, the things that I've done
I thought I'd get away with all that pain
Black water, Floating out on the tide
Salt water, filling me up inside
Once a while ago, thought I might stop
Though I'd sinned there was time to make right
And now pace has, become too much,
as I go under I begin to pray
Black water, Floating out ...